On a hot day,
My parents were in a public pool,
They had just seen each other,
It was the first time they met,
That was what I listened from their mouth,
Although they loved each other a lot,
And it was true,
I didn't know if that love was going to last long,
This love makes me the happiest boy in the world.
2 Literary devices: On a hot day ( sensory image)
That was what I listened from their mouth(auditory image).
Good work Aza.
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