lunes, 7 de septiembre de 2015

"their first time"

On a hot day,
My parents were in a public pool,
They had just seen each other,
It was the first time they met,
That was what I listened from their mouth,
Although they loved each other a lot,
And it was true,
I didn't know if that love was going to last long,
This love makes me the happiest boy in the world.



2 Literary devices:  On a hot day ( sensory image)
      That was what I listened from their mouth(auditory image).

1 comentario:

  1. Good work Aza.
    How about organising your poem into different stanzas?

    7 (seven)

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