second essay

Final version of my essay 

During this century the percentage of food that people consume has risen in a big way throughout the world, increasing the problem of obesity. These people have to be aware of unhealthy food and aldo the amount they consume, some of them are conscious and call for profesional help to change and be healthier but others don´t do that, because of economic problems or maybe because they don´t care about this desease. A good way to improve this weakness is by doing exercise during a long period of time but to accomplish this, people have to be consciously of what they want.

If we start thinking in the minds of people with obesity we can realize that when they see publicities of organisations to improve obesity, we will notice how bad they will feel inside their bodies, because many people will see it or because fat people want to be less fat, all in all they don´t have to feel bad because if many see them they will collaborate on helping them to lose their disease, but everything has it´s bad side, because the advertisements and the treatments are expensive for them or not.

Talking about people with obesity makes us think about young children. why?, because children's have to be well educated on the importance of having a healthy lifestyle, implementing it during all their lives so as to grow healthy, the bad thing is that this education takes too much time, because it´s necessary to be patient with their own child, but this will help them to be intelligent and proud of themselves.

To conclude, I think obesity is one of the most important problems in the world, so solutions need to be carried out patiently and in orderly manner in order to decrease obesity in the world, and also I think people will have to be more conscious over this situation to improve in the future.